Collab : Ashe + Jinx

The poses are nicely dynamic - particularly like the foreshortening of the arm holding the bow. The details of the clothing and faces are also well captured; the expression on the archer's face is very effective.

In terms of composition, it feels a little cluttered. There's no single focal point to the image, so the viewer's attention is more distracted than it should be. The colouring could have blunted/downplayed this a little (by e.g. using stronger colours on the archer and giving a bit of distance-blur to the girl behind), but it's important to keep in mind when you're creating the scene that there should be a key point for the audience to center on and radiate out from there. Even something as simple as moving the archer to the right of her current position, giving a block of back-to-back figures against a wider background.

Aside from that issue, a quality piece with some fine skills on show. Good job!