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June 16, 2012
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:iconmurasaki-hoshi:
something i did months ago ~
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:iconfumoffu89:
I'm gonna write a critique if you don't mind. I'm not the best painter around but I will give some insight with the painting. I hope you don't take offense to my suggestions.

Firstly, the composition. I think the positioning of the character itself is quite good as you obviously focus on the character from the first glance. The background is slightly confusing to me and I think it kinda is too overpowering as the background and it clashes with the character in terms of line thickness/sharpness. The perspective is slightly weird in my opinion. A suggestion would be to flip the canvas horizontally whilst painting as you can spot mistakes easily especially with perspective.

Secondly, the color. The color chosen is quite good, choosing a hot color for the character over the cold background makes the character stand out a bit more, which is a good thing. I think the background coloring (the sky) is awesome:D

I think you have great potential and you will become better in the future. i hope this sort of review is fair and this is just my honest opinion of this piece.
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Wow, I'm utterly amazed (bad computer, will misspell). I don't think this can't get any better unless some took a magnifing glass and lood at it from a pixel point view. Which we all know, is a waste of our time.

This artwork is just amazing, absoultly flawless. Nothing seems out of balance and the whole thing is just great piece of work. I get a feeling its from an anime I've seen before and I just can't put my finger on it.

There are no faults unless I can count the smudges on my computer then I can give it a worst review. Thank god there isn't any smudges on my computer screen so no faults!

You get my best score that I can give. 10/10. You get my watch.
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~Steph1192 Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible work.
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:iconnebulawolf:
I love your art it just gets better
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:iconexhaltorio:
very well drawn!

I think that if some light action lines were drawn it could heighten the emotional and action dynamism action of the character if added correctly - but maybe that's just me :)
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Mood: Love *CJ-DB Jun 26, 2012   Traditional Artist
Very pretty :love:
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~tursiops33 Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really nice! Well done!
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:iconthevocaloid1:
Amazing and awsome :wow:
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~Metalraptor Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very awesome, fantastic work. ^_^
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