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commissioned by :iconhigh-on-paras:

this is her OC (Viveca Quidel)


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:iconfieryrebirth:
Another cutie, good job Hoshi-chan. You did an excellent job on the character's eyes, however, they lack the intensity of what the piece seems to represent. The molten rocks in the background were a good touch but I can't exactly see it but I think they required a bit more detail. If the character's location is an illusion I'd understand and assume the volcanic scenario background is a representation of her weapon. This isn't your best work, but you did a solid job representing the commissioner's character, I'm sure. However, the torn sash could use a bit more work unless you were aiming for a more Eastern style, either way the background is so full of detail that it does steal the character's shine.
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:iconluveydovey93:
This attracted my eyes immediately! lol! It's very colorful! The only issues if I feel there are too many things that obscure the eyes from really noticing the main aspect, the character. I feel the background is too busy, and it steals the spotlight of the character.

The character is really cute, with a pretty nice outfit fitting to her ability as a fire tamer??? lol.

Your digital art skills are really impressive! It amazes me how good you are!!! You put a lot of details into the littlest things, and that makes you a great artist.

I love this picture! It brought my eyes to it immediately!! Love it lots!
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Very nice job :)

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:iconkamikaze-kaito:
I love how you did the fire. X3 Great job! :la:

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It looks like everything is moving! :D
Really good job man! ;)

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Darn, typo error. :O_o: *inserts 'say' in the sentence.* :XD:

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Wow, the fire looks absolutely stunning! :3
Moooore! :D

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Great one! Love it!

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I love this picture,the color scheme is great. I like that the background goes with the picture but isn't overly distracting. However, her hand on the top of the sword looks really off to me, like it's missing some fingers. The fire on top of her head also is a bit too "in your face" like the colors are too bright, even for fire. Other than those things I'd say this is a lovely picture, keep up the great work. :)
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:hug: ~ colors are amazing

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