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October 18, 2009
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:iconfieryrebirth:
Hello Hoshi-chan!

Again, I have no knowledge whatsoever of the universe the characters are from in this piece but I will give you as much critique as I can.

You've done a great job expressing the "life" through the girl's eyes and the jewel near the hilt of the sword.

As always, the detail in the character's clothing and accessories is amazing in your style although what actually bugs me about the blade of her weapon is the "skin sheen" on the middle of it which does not look right. Now that I look at that small error, the blade overall doesn't look like an actual weapon, as if it was made of a rather dull material.

One final thing that griped me about the piece was that her supposed-opponent, the dragon, looks to be part of the background if it was supposed to serve as the second character on this art. Regardless, the detail in it's eye area, horns, scaling, and teeth is top-notch.
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~Demon0fDarkness 6 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your colors and everything are so stunning!!!!! so many amazing deviations. XD
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Mood: Love ~nightwisher0990 Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ooohhh wow i love it :)
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:iconlordtrigonstar:
Beautiful. :love:

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Trigon: Did Arella told you what happen to your father?

Raven: She told me enough. She told me you kill him.

Trigon: No, I am your father.

Raven: NO!!!
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Mood: Love ~Aili-san Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH my god, IM so inlove with that picture~
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~glubglubfish Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow
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~A-Mystic-Wolf Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
amezingggg *-*
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:iconmydarksky101:
nice! keep it up! :D
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:iconconchichi:
it's look awesome xD~!!!
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Mood: Joy ~PandaDude17 Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love the dragon and overall composition of this pic ^^. First time viewer of your collection of art and I'm impressed. Keep it up!
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:iconmurasaki-hoshi:
thank you very much ^^
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